WHEN JEREMY STILLS WALKED INTO HIS GARAGE, the first thing that hit him was the stench of Benito's soiled clothing, a foul combination of
Nice story, Thadd. Needs a bit of editing. Tag-lines, for example, are not stand-alone sentences needing to be capitalized. But despite the few glitches that may be present: WHAT A TALE! Great pacing, concept, and delivery. Just the right length, too. Thi