Rob

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WHEN JEREMY STILLS WALKED INTO HIS GARAGE, the first thing that hit him was the stench of Benito's soiled clothing, a foul combination of

By Rob

  • Rob Oct 11, 2011
    Noah's Market

    thadd presley Jan 1, 1970

    192Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Others Stories | 4 Comments

    Nice story, Thadd. Needs a bit of editing. Tag-lines, for example, are not stand-alone sentences needing to be capitalized. But despite the few glitches that may be present: WHAT A TALE! Great pacing, concept, and delivery. Just the right length, too. Thi

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