Nicole

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Home grew boring for Maggie one night as so she decided to take herself down to the theater on Main Street and see a movie.  It was

By Nicole

  • Nicole Feb 24, 2012
    Judge not.....

    Diana Jan 1, 1970

    96Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Others Stories | 17 Comments

    It's a creative story, but the dialogue seems a little unnatural. It just doesn'tsound like how people would speak. Work on that a bit and you have a good little story here.

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