zomblie outbreak 2

Supernatural Stories | Sep 18, 2012 | 4 min read
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Supernatural Stories

zomblie outbreak 2

i know i had to be strong for my family thats why i told beth to go to jail no one or nothin will be able to get in. but what about the prisoner said will. do you think they will still be there? said will i dont think so said beth they peoblemly let them go when the out break happened. i sure hope so said will holdin marie.
so maybe we should go find more for before sunset so we wont have to bring the children back out tommorrow to find more food, we have maybe five hours said beth.

after drivin to next store the babys wont stop crying because they was hungry. merry was screamin so lond i was scared it was goin to attract the walkers i didnt know what to do so i took a bottle of water and put some powered milk in it and gave the children their bottles to stop them from cryin. it stoped i just hope no walkers heard the crys. me, beth and will, marie walked in to the store there was some rice and beens all we have to do is build a fire to cook it. will we need to find a pot so we can cook these rice and beens. thejail should have pots said will stoves to and if they use gas then we can use it. i hope so to said beth. ok who wants to go to the next store and see what we can find there .

as we was drivin down the road to the next town we seen walkers all over one here one there but no packs nothin beths hand pick coundnt take care of. two miles later we seen the next store god i hope we find enough for tommorrow, as we walked in to the door there was a walkers chasing a women and a men i didnt know what to do i couldnt just stand there and watch them die so i pulled my gun out and shot the walker. the men and women thanked me. i am mark and this is my wife jane she is hurt, she fell when we was runnin. where did you come from mark beth asked? we came from geogria we had a group up there but we was tryin to find janes family to see if they was ok. so do you think it would be safe to try and find them again. maybe said jane they are stayin in a high school.

as i was lookin around i found more powered milk and ten cans of tuna,more rice ,three cans of corn, and one box of crackers. i was happy we have food for two or three days and now that we have more people in are group we can send people out to find food if needed. is everyonne ready to head to the jail said beth. jail what jail said jane? we are goin to the jail cause the walker cant get in its safe. ok i see said jane.

one two hours before sunset we pulled in to the jail and took all the food and children inside beth and will walked ahead to make sure it was safe. "ALL CLEAN" said beth. will fould the light box so we could shut and lock the doors and have lights. me ,beth,jane cooked for the group it has been a long time since i had a how cooked meal. i am happy my family has made it this far i have kept they safe for this long. but i dont know what is in store for tommorrow.....

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Velma golden Sep 19, 2012

I agree,lost the thread at times, but spelling is important, theme is good keep going, you will make it.

Tjones71 Sep 18, 2012

Grammatical errors makes it hard to read. Try re-reading it to yourself word for word for what it says instead of what you are meaning to say. Spell check will also help your writing out. Otherwise, a good idea of a book to develop.

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