While He Was Walking

Thriller Stories | Jul 3, 2011 | 30 min read
268 Votes, average: 4 out of 5
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While He Was Walking

It was a no moon night............when a huge storm came and lightning was striking constantly with thunderous sounds. While on his way back from office in the evening, he could find no mode of transportation. That is when he thought of taking a shorter route to his place through the forest, so as to reach home early as the weather was getting worse by the second. So he started moving towards the dense forest. He walked all alone in the darkness, not bothering about the thunder. He could hear the owls hooting and the wind rustling through the leaves.

On lonely path, he kept on going, slightly pacing his steps, when suddenly he heard a noise, which startled him. He stopped and turned around, terrified. But he saw no one there. He started walking again, shivering a little, when he heard the voice again. The voice asked him, "Where are you going...............??????". He froze and it was then when a lady stood before him, with messed up long hair and black clothes. She spread her hands and asked him to come with her. He could not feel his legs even though he could hear himself shouting that he must run..............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



As he failed to move, the lady slowly moved closer to him. She lifted her drape and then he saw, she was a faceless woman. She had no eyes, nose or mouth. All he could see was a smooth surface. He felt sick. Then suddenly he lifted his feet and started running towards the road. He did not look back, and kept running............, running.........., running..............…

The lady suddenly appeared in front of him and shoved him across a tree, he hit his head hard and she stabbed him with a broken branch. Blood spilled out of his mouth, and he fell on the ground. She stood before him and did not move. With the little life left in him, he cried and crawled to save himself. His blood leaving traces on the wet leaves. He dragged his body, excruciating pain shooting through his lungs. He caught hold of a branch and tried to pull himself up, but he suddenly felt a weight over himself. Pain shot through his shoulder as if someone had bitten him fiercely. He soon realized, it was the faceless lady, slowly eating him. He lay there, still, till all he could feel was, nothing...........!!!!!!!!!!!

 

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Jun 20, 2012

They say a picture is worth a thousand words. That picture is worth a million. You should forget about being a writer, you stink. Make a horror movie and get rich baby. What a picture! What a picture! Good luck. :)

Akash Jul 5, 2011

awesome story.

Rohit Jul 5, 2011

nice story!

Bhupendra Jul 5, 2011

good story. i like it.

Vinay Jul 5, 2011

Its horrible story. i like it.

Ritesh Jul 5, 2011

it nice. like it

Vikas Jul 5, 2011

nice like it.....

Amit Sinha Jul 4, 2011

Its good story. Really scared me. I didn'twant to see it in my dream because it's horrible. After a long time I have read a scary story because I?m not much strong by heart but this story is really interesting, entertaining and horrible. Definitely I will

Nikhil Jul 4, 2011

Nice Efforts

Alok Jul 4, 2011

Nice story priyanka

Priyanka Jul 4, 2011

thanks 4 people liking my story... :)

Ram Jul 4, 2011

it is very screaming story. i like it

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