They come a looking in the night

Thriller Stories | Aug 21, 2012 | 2 min read
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They come a looking in the night

Once in Leesburg,GA there was a little house. A fammily lived there two kids a mama and a papa. One night the little girl and her brother heard moans from outside the window. they looked out to see what it was and saw nothing. They were very fritened but the boy told his sister "Don't you worry Cindy Jane there ain't nothin' out there that gonna hutr you." She hung on to her brother with great strangeth not geting off. Papa asked if anyone wanted to go to get wood with him they all said no. So he went out to the woods to get wood for the fire and he saw it. He ran home screaming "Run!Run!The zombies they is attackin'! He ran in his house locked all the doors and windows. Honey are you alright!? There comein'. What? What's Comin'? Them. What did you see in the woods. Mama said in a dead serious tone. Pumkin can I talk to you alone for a minuet,please? Yes. we were right. I saw the zombies in the in the woods when I was lookin' for wood. Keep the doors and windows locked at all times. Nobody gose anywere alone. Mama was upstairs with the kids. Mama had an Sniper rifle Billy James had a hunting rifle and Cindy Jane had an A-19 pistle. They were ready. Papa went to work carying an AK-47. He was shooting left and right to keep the zomies away. When he came home that night he saw a zombie hanging onto his truck. He shot it in the eye and made sure it was dead. When they went to bed that night they to watch shifts. They didn't see any zombie. All they saw was auntie and nana drive up in there comvertable with lugege. They ran and got the door to let them in. They let them in on the what they saw. Auntie was sacred to daeth. Nana said give me a gun. When they woke up the next morning the zombies were sworming. Papa stayed home and so did the kids. Auntie intertaned the kids and everyone else shot at zombies. That afternoon they saw emma but as a zombie. They didn't want to shoot emma but they did. Then a zombie got in and almost bit auntie. It got on top of her it was about to bite her then they pried it off of her no bite not even a scratch. They found out why the zombie apocilips had started. Someone named Erin Taggerdman had died in there basement and spread the disese all throw Leesburg,GA This storie was inspierd by The Walking Dead About the athurs : Hannah Minucci an 8 year old girl helped her 10 year old freind Abbie Beine write this Jaw dropping Bone chilling horror storrie birthday Mrach 25 favorite color green a cool girl with an amazing draw to commidie and scary stories favorite animal Elafant I think Hannah is cute funny spontaniees she is my BFF. Abbie Beine is a 10 year old girl birthday December 20 favorite color yellow faviorte animal girrafe I think Abbie is smart cute nice and funny she's my BFF

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Penny Jun 11, 2017

grammar?

Deasha Oct 23, 2012

?Run!Run!The zombies they is attackin?! Best line.

Tjones71 Sep 19, 2012

This was obviously written by a small child the grammar is ....... mom try putting these on your refrigerator not on here.

Andreea Aug 21, 2012

Ok, so if your "BFF" have 8 and 10 year old, then how old are you? :| I don'twant to be bad but, can you come back when you know how to write correctly and not saying at the end what is your friends favourite animals, please? Thank you.

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