The horrors of prom night

Suspense Stories | Apr 21, 2012 | 2 min read
60 Votes, average: 4 out of 5
Suspense Stories

The horrors of prom night

So i'm standing at my locker in school when i notice out the corner of my eye a cute girl walking towards me. "HEY" She says. "HEY, do i know you." i ask. "I'm layla, we were in maths class together.. And i'm just gonna be honest with you here, i would love to go to prom with you!". "WOAH, erm.." And just as i go to reply my girlfriend pops up from out of no where in my face, "HEY BABE" She says and gives me a kiss on the lips. "Hey baby" i say. Embarrassed, Layla turns her head and walks away down the corridor.

"Who was that girl?" my girlfriend asks curiously. "Oh that girl, she was just asking me if i knew the time" I tell her.

Later that day the school bell rings and its time to go home after an eventful day at school. I get to the school gates where my bike is waiting for me to take the chains off it and ride home, but i notice a slash in the front tire! "WTF happend here" i say to myself. I take off the chains and carry my bike down the road when all of a sudden, standing at the bottom of the road i see Layla! standing still with a knife in her hand! "DID YOU DO THIS?" i shouted at her in an angry tone, But she doesn't reply, she just continues to stand there at the bottom of the road starring at me, holding that knife in her hand. "CRAZY BITCH" i shout at her. Not wanting a conflict with a crazed girl holding a knife in her hand i turn the other way and take the other route home, that was the last i seen of Layla.. well, at least that's what i thought.

After a crazy day at school i can't wait to jump in my bed, turn my music on and drift away to Paramore playing through my headphones.

The following morning i have not woken up in my comfy bed with my headphones in playing sweet music. Instead i'm tied to a chair in a dark room and standing in front of me is Layla! Holding that damn butchers knife in her hand!

"I asked you to take me to prom" she says quietly in an upset voice..

I'm screaming at her but my mouth is taped shut!

"Is she more pretty than me, am i ugly?" She asks me, pointing the knife at my throat. "I've had enough with boys like you!!" she screams at me, She then gets down on her knees and takes off my shoes and socks, holds the sharp knife down on the middle of my foot, and grabs a hammer with her other hand. "you made me do this" she says as she hammers down on the knife forcing the blade right through the middle of my foot and through the floor board. I scream in agony.. the pain is unbearable, feels like every bone in my foot is on fire! She grabs another knife and does the same to my other foot.

Layla stands up and switches on the light, i almost pass out by what i'm seeing, 5 other boys my age all tied to chairs with knifes through their feet just like mine.

"NOW I'M GONNA LEAVE YOU IN HERE TO DIE, WITH ALL THE OTHER BOYS THAT REJECTED ME"

 
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Dina Apr 21, 2012

good start! I was interested in knowing what's gonna happen next,but towards the end it was abit rushed apart from that it's pretty good 4stars!

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