The demon at the door

Thriller Stories | Oct 6, 2012 | 4 min read
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The demon at the door

Late at night past 12:00 I was busy chatting with my girls while my parents were in the living room, we were all telling horror stories until we all saw a dark shadowy figure with red gleaming eyes at the bathroom door we tried to ignore the dark figure but if we did it would only came closer and closer to my bedroom door, we had a bet of who should go and see if it was nothing real, and always as we did the bet I always lost so I had to go and see it was real or we would all be in trouble.As I got closer to the figure while it wasn't looking I could here the figure muttering underneath the cloak that it was wearing I had no brothers or sisters I got really scared so I came back to my room and found my friends body parts ripped apart I had no where to go so I stayed in the bloody room " it seams to of bean a fight in here but if it was, where is the one who had started this up?" as the time past by It seamed to be night time all the time. lost & confused at the same time I could hear the same sound's that I had heard from the weird figure at midnight. It wasn't the same with out them with me I could see that the figure was laughing of what of happend to them and I was not at all happy of what that darn thing had done to my only best friends that I had ever had,It seamed some how different in my room and the house it was all quiet the tv wasn't on and I guessed that they had already went to bed so I went in there room and it was the same of what had happened to my friends now I felt really angry at the same time I was upset of what had happened to my friends so I left there room and went back to my room and tried to figure out what is going on tonight but one thing for sure they are not dead cause they just want me to think that but I think they had hidden them and I would be the last one left " they will be after me, I know they will" so I had no choice but find some clues they had left behind at least the figure had left so went there first and found nothing but a nasty rotten scent that had left " yuck!! rotten eggs!!" time was ahead and I had to move fast but I fished looking around the house and the only place that I had not looked at was the spare room I thought about it first, sooner or later I had no choice so I went in "pitch black great!" I had to find the light switch to look around but as I did I could feel something bad going on in this room... Later all I could see was red eyes or something like that I gave up of looking in this room so I went to the door of were I would of thought it would be and when I did find it the darn door locked so I was stuck in here I was trying to figure out what to do with the rest of my life stay locked up in here or face my death... the red eyes seemed to be moving every now and then I thought it was my head messing around with me then I heard some people trying to say something " forget about us and get out of here!" that was all I could make out of the words but as they started to say something else something or someone had hit them or of knocked them out, I had to move fast or I had to kill myself but before I could do anything I heard something else in the darkness " grab the torch It's right in front of you!" and the same thing happened again they got knocked out " what are you doing to these people?!" nothing happened so I found the torch and it turned out to be a knife so I moved forward and found the people tied up together "get out of here while you still can!" " why?" they didn't come back so I cut the rope so they could get out but they don't even move but they kept on saying to get out and i have no idea what they meant but before I could tell from the darkness is the same figure from the start, it seamed to be friendly but instead it started to chase me out of the room until I left it stopped " why are you doing this??" before I could get to the door that thing locked it again! " uh now what am I supposed to do?!" I spent all the time out side of room but all I could hear was screaming people in pain " why are you doing this to them!!! they had done nothing wrong to be treated this way!!" but did they notice no they kept on doing to them in first place... there was nothing that I could do so I went to my room and sat in there until it stopped but if I did they came to my room all the time did I care?.... no so I let them kill me could I get out yes so I let the others go home as for my friends & family I couldn't find them " maybe they killed them:(" and did kill them. So I went back to my room and read till it was morning and it never change so I gave up with my life and killed my self so read this and if it did happen to you I would do what I did. I did it in a act of a heartbreak.

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Admin Oct 11, 2012

dark shadowy

Velma golden Oct 6, 2012

uhuh, if I had found my friends hacked up, and the same to my parents you can bet your sweet bippy, I would have been out of there in a he-- of a big hurry!!But then who would in a make believe tale of horror. ME!! just kidding, some spell check would hel

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