The china doll
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On a Saturday afternoon a little girl called Emily was out shopping with her mum and baby sister.They passed an old shop and in the shop window was a beautiful China doll.Emily was ten then so she was collecting China dolls.The one she loved had a light blue and white frilly dress on and blonde curly hair.She begged and begged her mum to buy it until she gave in.By the time they got home it was stormy and pitch black so they fell asleep.

In the middle of the night, Emily awoke by a smash and crash but she ignored it until she started hearing noises.”Emily I’m on the?
stairs” “Emily I’m coming” “Emily I’m on the top step” “Emily I’m in your mum’s room” “Emily I’m on your mum’s bed” “Emily I’m going to kill her” she got scared and hid under her blanket but the China doll kept repeating those words.But in her brother’s room and then hers.The next door neighbor heard all of it and decided to call the police.About ten minutes later the police arrived and searched the house and found everybody in the house murdered.Then they saw the China doll on the matail piece and heard the same noise again but the doll had a bloody axe in her hand.The police died hearing the words “police men I’m behind you!”

The End by Hollie Cox 15/07/17
Inspired by my big sister jade when she was younger she had a big collection of creepy looking China dolls made at 10:41 pm This is based on a story I got told when I was younger I hope you like it please vote 5 ????
Thanks for reading my story I am 12years old thanks again. On a Saturday afternoon a little girl called Emily was out shopping with her mum and baby sister.They passed an old shop and in the shop window was a beautiful China doll.Emily was ten then so she was collecting China dolls.The one she loved had a light blue and white frilly dress on and blonde curly hair.She begged and begged her mum to buy it until she gave in.By the time they got home it was stormy and pitch black so they fell asleep.

In the middle of the night, Emily awoke by a smash and crash but she ignored it until she started hearing noises.”Emily I’m on the?
stairs” “Emily I’m coming” “Emily I’m on the top step” “Emily I’m in your mum’s room” “Emily I’m on your mum’s bed” “Emily I’m going to kill her” she got scared and hid under her blanket but the China doll kept repeating those words.But in her brother’s room and then hers.The next door neighbor heard all of it and decided to call the police.About ten minutes later the police arrived and searched the house and found everybody in the house murdered.Then they saw the China doll on the matail piece and heard the same noise again but the doll had a bloody axe in her hand.The police died hearing the words “police men I’m behind you!”

The End by Hollie Cox 15/07/17
Inspired by my big sister jade when she was younger she had a big collection of creepy looking China dolls made at 10:41 pm This is based on a story I got told when I was younger I hope you like it please vote 5 ????
Thanks for reading my story I am 12years old thanks again xx!????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????On a Saturday afternoon a little girl called Emily was out shopping with her mum and baby sister.They passed an old shop and in the shop window was a beautiful China doll.Emily was ten then so she was collecting China dolls.The one she loved had a light blue and white frilly dress on and blonde curly hair.She begged and begged her mum to buy it until she gave in.By the time they got home it was stormy and pitch black so they fell asleep.

In the middle of the night, Emily awoke by a smash and crash but she ignored it until she started hearing noises.”Emily I’m on the?

stairs” “Emily I’m coming” “Emily I’m on the top step” “Emily I’m in your mum’s room” “Emily I’m on your mum’s bed” “Emily I’m going to kill her” she got scared and hid under her blanket but the China doll kept repeating those words.But in her brother’s room and then hers.The next door neighbor heard all of it and decided to call the police.About ten minutes later the police arrived and searched the house and found everybody in the house murdered.Then they saw the China doll on the matail piece and heard the same noise again but the doll had a bloody axe in her hand.The police died hearing the words “police men I’m behind you!”

The End by Hollie Cox 15/07/17
Inspired by my big sister jade when she was younger she had a big collection of creepy looking China dolls made at 10:41 pm This is based on a story I got told when I was younger I hope you like it please vote 5 ????
Thanks for reading my story I am 12years old thanks again xx!??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????On a Saturday afternoon a little girl called Emily was out shopping with her mum and baby sister.They passed an old shop and in the shop window was a beautiful China doll.Emily was ten then so she was collecting China dolls.The one she loved had a light blue and white frilly dress on and blonde curly hair.She begged and begged her mum to buy it until she gave in.By the time they got home it was stormy and pitch black so they fell asleep.

In the middle of the night, Emily awoke by a smash and crash but she ignored it until she started hearing noises.”Emily I’m on the?
stairs” “Emily I’m coming” “Emily I’m on the top step” “Emily I’m in your mum’s room” “Emily I’m on your mum’s bed” “Emily I’m going to kill her” she got scared and hid under her blanket but the China doll kept repeating those words.But in her brother’s room and then hers.The next door neighbor heard all of it and decided to call the police.About ten minutes later the police arrived and searched the house and found everybody in the house murdered.Then they saw the China doll on the matail piece and heard the same noise again but the doll had a bloody axe in her hand.The police died hearing the words “police men I’m behind you!”

The End by Hollie Cox 15/07/17
Inspired by my big sister jade when she was younger she had a big collection of creepy looking China dolls made at 10:41 pm This is based on a story I got told when I was younger I hope you like it please vote 5 ????
Thanks for reading my story I am 12years old thanks again xx!??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????




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