THANKING WITH A RING

Suspense Stories | Jul 5, 2017 | 2 min read
108 Votes, average: 4 out of 5
Suspense Stories

THANKING WITH A RING

A COMPELLING DARK TWISTED HORROR DREAM. INSPIRED BY A DARK DREAM I HAD. READ IF YOU DARE ??

Dreams are strange but not as strange as this and will frighten you so you been warned:

CHAPTER 1
DECEIVING ALLURING HOUSE

A sheen day with a steady breeze as I could see the trees prancing by the rythem of the winds. I see I'm located outside a home colony, with beautifying homes. I'm standing with a group of people, guided by a tourist guide probing and photographing.

Everyone just admiring every home encountered, but in my mind all I could think was how nothing special were about none of the abodes, nothing out of the ordinary.

At least that's what I thought until we finally reached the last abode, leaving everyone so mesmerized including myself, I felt a strange vibe from it, and I said to myself, " There's something odd, but what? It looks absolutely normal, a two story modern home, white color, like a simple dream home.

I knew otherwise and curiosity had me. Everyone but I never took any pictures just observing as I went on.

The tourist guide then had everyone enter the home but before we do she starts to explain to us on some things. I was very excited to enter but also nervous.

TOURIST GUIDE MALE: This is our last visit and now we will have the great honor to explore everything inside, starts to smile.

NANCY AS MYSELF: (I COULDNT HELP BUT RAISE MY HAND TO BE SEEN AND SHOUT OUT SOMETHING) "What's so special about this house"!?

Everyone mumbles between themselves and the tourist guide stares at me and says now you don't want me to spoil that for everyone now do we? Starts to chuckle and everyone starts to laugh away, as I stay silent and very

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DD1st Sep 25, 2017

I don'tsee the rest of the story come to think of it where is the rest???

Demah1st Jul 21, 2017

um...is there a part two...or is that it

SwirlyBrightSnow13 Jul 21, 2017

A bit confusing, ??but good start!

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