Mysterious House

Thriller Stories | Jan 25, 2013 | 4 min read
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Mysterious House

In the late 1990s, there was a house deep in the woods. But there was something about this house. When ever somebody would enter the house, they would never exit. But then one day, there was a boy named Gavin. He was a 15 year old boy. He has heard about all of the entering but no exiting and said" that's nonsense"! So one day he decided that he would give it a try. So one Sunday, he and his friends met up and they all started to think of a plan. One friend named Jamie, said" How about this, two of us go in with a weapon,light, and more. When the other three of us stay out here on guard  But when two of you say"all clear "through the walkie-talkies, the rest of us will come in and all of us will get evidence that we survived, we will become heroes to the town." After Jamie finished saying his idea, Gavin just looked at Jamie like he was he didn't feel too good about the idea. Gavin just ignored the feeling and went home. All Gavin was able to dream about was if he was going to survive or not. At the same time, he thought about if he was in the group that was going into the house. When the next day came along, he and his friends grouped up into a group of two and a group of three. Gavin was thankful because he was put into the group that will be outside acting as if they were guards  That weird feeling came back to him like the flu. He felt as if he was going to throw up, but when he would tell somebody, they would just say that he was just nervous. Soon he just began to think the same. Later that day, Jamie told Gavin that he had to think of what they need for the investigation. Gavin thought and thought and thought until it hit him. He told the others that they need cameras and food. But they asked him "Where would we buy food when we don't have jobs or money"? They all thought for a minute of two and Kacey, Gavin's friend said" How about we ask our parents for some food or we could have them buy us some but we'll repay them by doing extra chores. "Every friend but Jamie agreed. He said What if our parents don't let us or buy us food?" Some agreed with Jamie. But the rest just ignored him. "We need to think of when we will go and investigate."Gavin suggested. Jamie answered. "Well how about tomorrow at 3 o'clock tomorrow?" All of the friends agreed. As the night went by and the day came, some started to become nervous, but others were fine. Hours and hours went by until 3 o'clock came along, it was the moment they have all been getting ready for, the investigation. They all came together at the supposedly haunted house in the woods. Kacey, Jamie, and Gavin were in a group while the rest (John and Sheldon) had to go inside. They were terrified before going in the house. They had a camera with night vision and a camera with thermal vision. They also had a day's food supply for if they got hungry. They finally entered telling themselves that they would not survive, but when they got to the second floor, they smelled an odd smell, like a dead animal or something. When they turned on the flashlight they saw a weird creature chewing on a dead body. Not any human body but it was the bully that bullied Sheldon and John. They wondered why he wasn't at school for a long time. That's not the scary part the scary part is what happened to John's leg. The creature must have had babies because when looked down, he saw a baby creature just like the one eating the bully. The baby was tearing through his pants and he knew if he moved a bit or made the tiniest sound the older one would be alarmed and would kill both him and Sheldon. At about 2 A.M., the creature finally gave up trying to eat John. So when it let go they recorded it helping it's mother eat the bully. At about 3 o'clock John and Sheldon both alerted the rest that it was not safe for them to enter the building any why nobody left the house. After awhile, John and Sheldon both left the house safe and glad they were alive. They explained the creatures and the bodies. After that, they showed the evidence to the mayor and he told them that they have solved the problem. Soon after they were called heroes, they wandered off with hundreds of thousands of dollars. Then they became PGH (professional ghost hunters).

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