my brother

Suspense Stories | Aug 22, 2014 | 2 min read
24 Votes, average: 3 out of 5
I was 9 and my little brother Adam was 6. I'm gonna be moving out the nasty house because i just turned 16. They took my brother away from me, I wonder to the back of my mind every once and a while, I ponder if my brother is alive or dead. one day I wish to come back and search for him.
It started slow but after a while the attacks got worse and worse. Anyway it all started on Adam's birthday when he turned 6. After his party and all of his crazy friends left we went to our bedroom. All of a sudden I herd him calling out my name. Axel.....Axel he said. What? I asked him look as he pointed to the corner of the room. When I looked over i saw  a man standing there in the corner of our bedroom with yellow glowing eyes. He was stairing at my brother. GET OUT OF MY ROOM! I screamed. It turned to me and laughed his smile was full of sharp teeth the thing stared at me for another five seconds and vanished.
The next morning we told them everything from last night. They said it was most likely a dream, but we knew it wasn't. This happened for a few weeks it would come and i would make it go away. I thought i was wining but I was wrong.
The next night about 3 months after it first appeared came again but it walked very slowly toward my brother. I jumped out of my bed and ran for him it flicked its hand and I flew into the wall. I watched it pick my brother up but I ran for it and pulled Adam right out of its hands. It turned and the look it gave me was terrifying. It looked like I was gonna get it really hard too, we were scared for the next few months, but our fear started to fall way slowly.
It didn't come back for about a year and a half. We almost forgot any of such thing even happened. It started up again on my brothers 8th birthday. I was awoken by a soft laugh and when I opened my eyes it was standing at the edge of my bed with its hands reaching out like it was trying to get me. Then I notice my brother was right next me hugging me super tight. It grabbed for him but I pushed his arms away. Take me instead I said. The thing stops for a second and lunges at my brother and gets him this time. I jumped up and grabbed my brother but he pulled him away from me and then took him to the corner of the room were we first saw him and it vanished. I ran around the room over and over and over searching for my brother.

Tags:

  
Report This Story
Notice (8): Undefined index: User [APP/View/stories/story.ctp, line 227]
Notice (8): Trying to access array offset on value of type null [APP/View/stories/story.ctp, line 227]

Recommendations

Reviews

Download the Short Story Lovers App

Read and write stories anytime, anywhere with the Short Story Lovers app