• It was only the middle of their third week at a new school and they were still assimilating.  Kevin and his brother Tyler had moved to Kansas with their parents recently and Kevin was still having a hard time.  He […]

  • Thanks Gary, I really appreciate the comment!

  • william wraith commented on the blog post The Note 2 years, 3 months ago

    Nice and short with a great creep-factor! You already know about your grammatical and spelling issues. You have a knack for keeping it brief with just enough details to tell the story, but not overwhelm the reader.

    • William, Thanks for your time i really appreciate it, i see what you mean and i agree with you but i’ll work harder on my next story please bare with me ,i guess it takes time :] but either way thank youu for the sweet comment.

  • william wraith commented on the blog post The Unknown 2 years, 3 months ago

    Creepy, and reminded me of the movie, “The Entity.” But what ever happened to the character of the roomate? Did this childhood friend remain in the house?

  • I’m assuming you were referring to “A Nightmare on Elm Street,” in your 1st story. The problem is that I didn’t know where you were going. When you write, you need to lead your audience where you want them to go. I didn’t know where you were going. Also, with regard to your 2nd story, [...]

  • william waith commented on the blog post The voice 2 years, 3 months ago

    Nice imagery and a creepy story! However, you really need to break that into intelligible paragraphs.

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