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william wraith wrote a new post, Jakob Jokenheimer 4 months, 3 weeks ago
It was only the middle of their third week at a new school and they were still assimilating. Kevin and his brother Tyler had moved to Kansas with their parents recently and Kevin was still having a hard time. He […]
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william wraith commented on the blog post Jakob Jokenheimer 1 year ago
Thanks Gary, I really appreciate the comment!
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william wraith commented on the blog post The Note 1 year ago
Nice and short with a great creep-factor! You already know about your grammatical and spelling issues. You have a knack for keeping it brief with just enough details to tell the story, but not overwhelm the reader.
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William, Thanks for your time i really appreciate it, i see what you mean and i agree with you but i’ll work harder on my next story please bare with me ,i guess it takes time :] but either way thank youu for the sweet comment.
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william wraith commented on the blog post The Unknown 1 year ago
Creepy, and reminded me of the movie, “The Entity.” But what ever happened to the character of the roomate? Did this childhood friend remain in the house?
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william wraith commented on the blog post Two Short Stories 1 year ago
I’m assuming you were referring to “A Nightmare on Elm Street,” in your 1st story. The problem is that I didn’t know where you were going. When you write, you need to lead your audience where you want them to go. I didn’t know where you were going. Also, with regard to your 2nd story, [...]
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william waith commented on the blog post The voice 1 year, 1 month ago
Nice imagery and a creepy story! However, you really need to break that into intelligible paragraphs.
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