Great story, liked the turn it on it’s head ending. I thought I was in the movie Hostel than it turns out to be something completely different. Keep up the good work.

Really liked this story. Did wonder where it was going at the beginning and with the subject matter of the press but the character of George kept me intrigued. I did feel sorry for George in the middle and loved […]

Good story very atmospheric setting. One thing I would have left out was the bit when Rick thinks of course, it’s wings haven’t developed yet. Just my opinion but I think Rick should have been scared to his wits […]

Excellent. Good story with a great concept. I like the idea and kinda reminded me of fight club in some places. My only area I found that could have been better was the dialogue being written phonetically to […]

Intriguing but did not get the ending.

Very good story, great style and a perfect ending.

Good story well done. Bit of mystery and gore. Though I felt sometimes we were reading your thoughts rather than the character’s thanks for posting and keep them coming.

A good proper short story. Great work.

Good story nice twist.

I like this story and like the original idea of a different kind of horror. Good work.

Good core idea but the grammar needs a lot of attention and I know I’m not perfect. Maybe you should read this aloud, to yourself an see if it flows. But like I said great core idea just needs some work in my opinion.

Great story, felt a good twist as I was picturing a man at first and great idea with her not being the only means for the Succorbenoth. The only real problem I felt which interrupted the flow was keeping […]

Good story and like the dream like feeling and the atmosphere of your world. The only negativity was I thought it was too long in the middle. But just my opinion is all. Keep the stories coming though.

Thanks Nikki for the comment, I almost forgot about this website. Been away from the game too long. I may have to submit something more now coming back here and reading stuff.

Hi Regina, many thanks for comment. Yeah I do love the last person alive scenarios. Funny, I kind of randomly picked Erik as a Russian, but I edited his line a couple of times. However my one retort and this may be weak is its Alan who is telling the story and keeping in with [...]

Thanks Adams. Always wondered how we would fare against nature. We are insignificant compared to animals I guess. If we were not on the planet maybe earth would be better off kind of thing. Natuarally the setting came out logical thinking that the last man alive would have to be where there is very [...]

Hey Amit, really appreciate the feedback, many thanks

Hi Belinda, thanks for your comment. Lol, yeah funny you should say that, the idea has somewhat been inspired by my cat and me wondering how much damage could he do, if he did not hold back and had no fear. Don’t turn your back on your cat and treat them well, you never know [...]