ENID

Supernatural Stories | Sep 17, 2011 | 2 min read
152 Votes, average: 4 out of 5
Enid.

 

"That your ball."

"My ball."

"Yes your ball, good girl."

"Me good girl."

"Do you love mammy?"

"My ball."

"Do you love mammy?"

"Mammy my ball."

"Can I play?"

"My ball."

"Mammy play yeah?"

"Me good girl."

"Yes good girl."

"Ball mine."

"Yes yours, do you love mammy?"

"Mine."

"Do you love mammy?"

The ball dropped from his hands, the clairvoyant's voice changed.

"She's gone."

The woman leaned down and picked it up and whispered to herself.

"Mammy still loves you."

 

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Feb 20, 2012

Hello!... An interesting discussion is worth comment. I think that you should write more on this topic, it might not be a taboo subject but generally people are not enough to speak on such topics. To the next. Cheers...

Geeta Sep 19, 2011

short and scary.. but personally i like reading stories with detailed description...

Admin Sep 17, 2011

Though we don'tallow such shorts but we found it different, so we made an exception. hope you all find it interesting.. do post your views if we should allow such short stories.

Ruhi Sep 17, 2011

aahh liked it.... The shortest!!!!!

Ruhaani Sep 17, 2011

wht a story.... exceptionally different 4m others..... less horror,,,more funny...:)))))

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