door Bells

Suspense Stories | Oct 16, 2012 | 4 min read
48 Votes, average: 4 out of 5
One day 3 girls named Lacy, Maggie, and Jessica were having a sleepover at Lacy's house. Lacy's parents went to a festibal and stayed the night at her grandparents house for the weekend. They let Lacy have some friends over to keep her company. But they could not invite boys. Lacy did not listen to her parents and invited her boyfriend, Kaleb, and Jessicas boyfriend, Stephen. Lacy, Maggie, and Jessica were in the kitchen when the doorbell rang. Lacy jumped off the kitchen counter and walked toward the front door. She unlocked it and opened it up. No one was there. Lacy looked around the porch but she couldn't find anyone there. "Are they here yet?" asked Jessica, excited to see Stephen. "No, probably just some 'ding-dong ditchers' or something" replied Lacy. "Or maybe it was Kaleb and Stephen playing around with us." said Maggie. "Maybe..whatever" said Lacy. Suddenly, there were rustling through the bushes in Lacy's front yard. Lacy turned around and still saw nothing. Thinking though it was a small animal like a rabbit or a skunk, she closed the door and walked back into the kitchen. As she walked up to the kitchen counter to meet with Jessica and Maggie, the doorbell rang once again, and Lacy ran toward the door, to maybe catch the "Ding-Dong Ditchers" that might be playing a trick on them. Lacy ran and oped the door, and there was Kaleb and Stephen standing with some packs of beer. "Kaleb! Stephen!" yelled Lacy. "Hey Lacy! Got some packs" Said Kaleb. "Yep, by the way, you still owe me for those." said Stephen. "Fine, but lets get in, it's freezing out here" "Agreed!". Lacy let Stephen and Kaleb walk in. She took one last look outside and shut the door behind her.They walked into the kitchen. Jessica jumped off the counter and ran and hugged Stephen as he walk in. Kaleb put the pack of beer on the counter and went over to Lacy and kissed her softly on the lips. "So, what do you guys want to do?" asked Stephen. "Well....lets tell stories" suggested Maggie. "What types of stories?" asked Jessica. "I got this very creepy scary story that happened in Holton not that long ago" replied Maggie. "Well, we have nothing better to do." said Kaleb.
"Lets go into the living room" said Lacy. Everyone made their way to the living room as Kaleb picked up the pack of beer. They all sat down in a circle and lower the lights. "ok, this happened about a year ago in Holton." started Maggie "There was this group of teenagers that were all alone and didn't have anything to do. Well they got drunk and then started hearing things. They heard scratching on the walls and the doorbell ringing repeatedly. They all finally went to sleep and the parents found them all dead with their index finger cut off." "Ewwww!" Yelled Jessica. "I don't get it......how was their index finger cut off? And how did they die?" Asked Kaleb. "Murderer could have killed them! But police say it was probably alcohol poisoning. And the index finger, people say it because you use it to ring the doorbell. But again, police say, they could have cut them off cause they were really drunk." "....oh" Said Lacy."Well, i am thirsty! Wanna beer Lacy?" asked Kaleb. "Nah, but thanks for asking!" "Whatever". The rest grabbed a beer and got really drunk. They yelled and wobbled every where. Lacy didn't want to be around them, so she went upstairs and fell asleep. As she fell asleep, she hear the doorbell ring repeatedly, but she figured it was just her friends. She went to sleep.

The next morning, Lacy went down stairs. When she reached the end of that stairs, she found all of her friend dead. laying motionless on the floor. Each of them with no index finger. She turned around and saw, written in blood 'Don't Ring The Door Bell'.

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Velma golden Oct 17, 2012

A goody.keep going, write more,and scare me more.

Priya Oct 16, 2012

Nice story...

Jonathan Oct 17, 2012

I thought this was an interesting little story. Good stuff.

Meenu Oct 16, 2012

your stories is very impressive

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