dog from Hell

Thriller Stories | Mar 4, 2013 | 4 min read
20 Votes, average: 4 out of 5
They say that you will know when you have met the devil, for when he disappears, and does nothing to you, he leaves you to deal with, his dog from hell!!
Bill & Falicity bought a house two miles from town in the woods. Newly wed's every thing was going great! A year past, things were looking good. bill being a hunter went out one day to go hunt sitting in his tree stand from a distance he thought he seen a shadow, maybe a deer,so he took out a scope, trying to figure out what the shape was? as soon as he got a good look, it was like the shadow was coming towards him, he got a brief look at a wicked face! sent chills up his spine, then quickly disappeared!

Some time passed, and the shadow haunted bill, he continued to wait, then a strange thing trotting towards him he sat still as it went by it looked deformed! It almost looked like a dog ,chills went up his spine & froze in his seat, bill could not believe what he was seeing! The thing went by then stopped dead in its tracks sniffing it growled a demonic sound never heard by bill! Then went on to soon disappear! bill began to breath, having enough excitement for one day, going home that night told Falicity all that had happen, and she to got chills! a few months went by, and bill wasn't having as many dreams of that day, the day had not been talked of, even bill's friends were not talking a bought it.

Things were going well then one night while getting ready to eat, Falicity was cooking at the stove looking out their big sliding glass door, the deformed dog was charging down a big hill from the back yard! Falicity screamed bill's name, Bill seen it coming, and sent Falicity to the basement! bill shut the light to the basement, and the dog smashed through the glass door! bill grabbed a gun off the wall, and as soon as he turned to shoot, the thing lunged at bill! he got knocked to the wall, the gun knocked the beast to the side, Bill fired the gun, and missed the beast heard Falicity scream from the basement, and instead of attacking Bill, it smashed through the basement for Falicity, bill got up, and went down the stairs and keep telling her to stay where she was! in a steel cabinet, she sat motionless! the thing smelled the fear! slamming it's head off the cabinet, bill flicked the light on she screamed in horror! bill crept, and got close trying not to shoot falicity, he shot it six times!

The thing turned be going to run, and knocked bill down, and he clenched waiting to get tore up, but the beast ran out of the house back to the woods! bill had a huge cut on his arm, and falicity called 911, when the cop's came, it was to dark out by this time to look, so first thing in the morning the search began! one mile in the woods they found the thing! it was laying dead, bill went to touch it with his gun, every one looking at it with horror never seen nothing like it! They all looked at each other, bill slowly went over to the thing, hoping it wasn't playing possum, staring at it trying to figure what the hell it was! one touch he gave with his gun, & it turned to dust! every one gasped for air! Nothing was left to bring to the lab to even test! Every one's Thought's were left to think the same thing! we will never know what it was!  just a note, that this story was inspired by a dream i once had,thanks for reading!

Tags:

  
Report This Story
Notice (8): Undefined index: User [APP/View/stories/story.ctp, line 227]
Notice (8): Trying to access array offset on value of type null [APP/View/stories/story.ctp, line 227]

Recommendations

Reviews

Maybelle Baird Mar 5, 2013

Have you ever thought about writing an ebook or guest authoring on other sites? I have a blog centered on the same topics you discuss and would really like to have you share some stories/information. I know my subscribers would appreciate your work. If yo

Archie Dutrisac Mar 5, 2013

trying to write a book has always been a brick wall, so after all these years,and now youtube is around, i took upon my self to narrate, and share my writing on youtube i already have video's up, and like it this way if you want to check em' out just go t

Download the Short Story Lovers App

Read and write stories anytime, anywhere with the Short Story Lovers app