deathly Palace

Thriller Stories | Nov 4, 2016 | 2 min read
72 Votes, average: 4 out of 5
Here's a real and true story!

I was a brave hearted person never believed in ghosts and always wanted to feel a paranormal experience and this experience changed my life.
Finally after boredom of books and study I was going for a vacation. I was heading to 'Bhuj' my native place in a train, there was a man sitting in front of me in train reading a book 'untold real ghost stories'. I asked him "Do you believe in ghosts?"
He said "Yeah and I've also visited places which are haunted. I am a paranormal witness ' I eagerly told him that in Bhuj there is a haunted haweli (palace). Anyone stayed for a night there never returns. He replied "Is that so? then we should definitely go there"
I told him "Of course this train is heading to bhuj. Let's go"
We reached Bhuj station and I took him to the haweli. It was a large palace with 199 rooms made in the times of Nawab (prince) Raghunath Rajwada. It was a palace where any one would love to stay. I told him that he can stay here I will come in morning with tea and breakfast to see if he is alive or not.

*******Night Passed*******

It was a pleasant morning. I went to the haweli with my fingers crossed and it was a huge relief, I saw he was brushing his teeth. "Let's have some tea" I told him. While having tea, I asked him "Did you experience anything?"
He said not much but there is one room which looked suspicious. We opened all the rooms and when I finished the 199th room, I asked him "What's wrong? They all look alike." He replied 'LOOK UP'

His dead body was hanging from the ceiling and bells started ringing in my head 'Dang Dang!'

My heart stopped, no one was there in haweli. The man talking to me was a ghost already and I started running as fast as I can. I directly took a train back to home and after that I never went back to Bhuj.

*******The End*******

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Rk766041 Dec 27, 2016

very good story

Shivpandya27 Nov 1, 2016

pls ignore that stuff at the end it's because it was compulsory to complete 450 words

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