death is coming

Others Stories | May 19, 2012 | 2 min read
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death is coming

I was with my mother in her car, actually driving it. I didn't realize that it was almost 10 o'clock in the night. Outside was pretty dark and it was becoming cold with every minute...or it was just my mind playing tricks. I was tired and my eyes weren't too opened, they were actually closing slowly. I suddenly heard something like a knock in the window. I opened my eyes to see...nothing. I turned my head to my mom and she didn't seem to hear the noise. It took me like two seconds to do this, and when I turned my head back, I saw it. With a horrifying blood smile, red eyes, dark figure and with no...shape. It was like a shadow, but it was too real to be just a simple shadow. I screamed, very loud. My mom asked in a hurry what happened and I told her what I saw. Suddenly I heard her screaming. I looked in front of me and saw like 4 monsters like the one at my window. They were knocking loudly like they wanted to break the glass. My mom lost control and we hit a tree. It started raining. I was still conscious but the car was broken in pieces. I started calling mom but she wasn't answering me. I screamed and cried but all in vain. I suddenly heard my my mom's voice from the outside calling me. I answered and she told me everything's be alright and that they'd get me out of there. She was outside, and I was better to know her safe. But I was still scared for myself, although I trusted mom.

15 minutes later

Mom: "God! Police!!!! You can't let her there!"

Police:"We're doing everything we can."

5 minutes later

"Fireeee!!!! Fire!!!! Everybody stay back!" I heard a voice screaming. The car caught fire, I was still inside. I just noticed that I was bleeding quite bad, too. I immediately felt pain and an inexplicable hot air coming towards my legs. I felt like melting. I started screaming and crying badly. I also heard my mom screaming and crying, she was saying: "Please, please, get her out!" But I was conscious that no one could do anything.  I heard a big big 'BOOM' and I  think you imagine what happened. I was dead, now and forever.

10 minutes later

Mom: "Oh, dear, why you left us alone?!" I was beside mom and looking at myself who was layed down, full of blood on my hands and legs and with my head broken.

"She didn't burned, she lost too much blood" said a paramedic. My mom was crying and  screaming beside me...old me. Death is coming earlier or later, and we can't do anything to stop it. We must accept it, I said to myself.

5.00am in the morgue-Name: Jessica Johnson, Status: Dead.

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Amit May 24, 2012

I like this story. Looking forward for more!

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