dancing with the devil

Others Stories | Apr 25, 2012 | 2 min read
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dancing with the devil

i live in in London, England and i almost died after a prom my highschool had. It all started when i met this guy at my school, Dwight G. Potter high. I had never seen him before so that meant he must be new. little did i know that he would reveal his true identity.  but before i tell you this story, i must tell you another.

"hey Amelia, have you seen the really cute guy. he's been staring at you for an hour now," said my best friend Tatiana.

"no, not really," i answered.

"well he's really cute and i think he likes you. Turn around"

i turned around and I saw a really cute guy sitting at the lunch table behind me. he really was cute. And he was wearing my favorite color. i wondered what his name was. as i got up to go talk to him, my ex-boyfriend Eddie walked up to me.

"hey amelia. so i was thinking, would you like to go to the prom with me?"

"um no," i answered. "plus, Potter, you broke up with me."

his last name is potter because his great-grandfather built the high school in 1889. potter is really popular. and plus he has a girlfriend already and it's my best friend Tatiana. i would not want to hurt her. Anyways. let me get on with the story.

"anyways potter, i was going to ask him to go to prom with me," i said pointing to the cute boy.

"him," asked eddie like he was surprised. "you gotta be kidding me. he ain't popular. and his name is dean. that is one ugly name. "amelia?"

"hey dean would you like to go to prom with me," i asked.

"sure."
then i walked away.

(after of the prom)

i had gotten home after the prom when i heard tapping on my bedroom window. i opened it and there was dean. i went outside to talk to him. after we were done, i hugged him and he wouldn't let go. he pulled out a knfe and stabbed me in the stomach. then i blacked out.

i woke up in the hospital. i turned on the news and there was dean.

"dean hansworth has stabbed another victim, 17 year old Amelia Vigon. he is an escaped serial killer who is actually 28 years old. he poses as a high schooler and goes to proms. he has been locked up in a mental institution."

pictures of dean came up and i said to myself "how could i have been dancing with the devil."

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Kristijan Olujic Apr 27, 2012

story is ok interesting but honestly not so scary.

Saul Hudson Apr 26, 2012

I quite liked this, but your lack of capitalisation and comma placement where needed spoilt it a little for me. If I were you I'd edit this a little. Other than that I liked it. :)

Seema Apr 25, 2012

this story is similar to a Hollywood movie

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