adopted

Supernatural Stories | Jun 2, 2012 | 6 min read
20 Votes, average: 3 out of 5
One morning, while I was by myself, I was getting ready for school when there was a loud horrible knock at the door. At the door was a young guy wearing a blue leather coat and black leather pants. I asked him what his name was; he said to me, "My name is Derek."  He also said, "You are adopted and your real parents are vampires.  They told me to come find you."  I was surprised, because I did not know that I was adopted.  My parents were dead.  They had died in a car crash and never told me.  I was living with my brother.  Or at least I thought he was my brother at the time. Then I asked him, "Does that mean I am a vampire too?"  Derek said that I was a half-vampire, because my dad had married a human.  He said I would not have to drink blood.

Derek wanted me to go with him and meet my real parents, but I didn't know whether or not to go.  I told him that I would ask my best friend if I should go.  He said to me; "Is your best friend Jake?"  I said to him; "Yes, Jake is my best friend."  He said "Did you know that Jake is a werewolf?" I was surprised that he was a werewolf.  I was wondering why he didn't tell me. I wanted to know why he didn't tell me.  So I told Derek that he could stay at my house until I got back. I told him that I was going to Jake's house to ask him why he didn't tell me that he was a werewolf.

I got to Jake's house and knocked on the black front door and Jake answered the door. I asked him why he didn't tell me that he was a werewolf.  He told me that he didn't want me to be afraid of him.  I told him that I wouldn't be afraid of him if he had told me.  I also told him about the guy, who was at my house, and what he told me.  I asked him whether or not I should go with him to meet my parents.  He said I should go.  Then he asked me if he could go with us. I told him to come with me back to
my house and to ask Derek if he could go.

We went back to my house. I asked Derek if Jake could go with us.  He said he could come with us to find my parents. I asked him where they were. He said they currently were in a huge mansion in Salt Lake City, Utah.  He said he did not know how long my parents were going to be there.  They had to move a lot because vampire
hunters were chasing them.  Derek said that he would drive us there to meet them. Within an hour we were headed to Salt Lake City, Utah.

As we were driving, I noticed that there was a black car with blue flames following us. This made me curious.  So I asked Derek who they were, but he didn't know.  So we decided to stop and ask the people in the car. They came out of the car. We saw that it was two guys wearing black leathery coats and brown leathery pants. They had sunglasses on so we could not see their eyes.  They weren't very nice when we asked them who they were.  I asked them their names and they told me they were Michael and Nick. I told them that they should stop following us.  They said no and got mad at us, so they started punching us. Since they were punching us, we started to hit them back. As soon as they stopped hitting us, we left.

We got in the car and drove off.  Once again we started heading to the mansion, but they was still following us. We did not like this, so we decided to lose them. We went around the block a couple of times.  We kept on turning so it seemed like we were going in circles.  After a while we finally lost them.

After an hour, we arrived at the big mansion. It looked like a castle.  There were lots of windows, but they all looked really dark. We went up to the blood-red door and knocked on it.  A young looking guy answered the door.  He was so happy to see me that he grabbed me and hugged me. I pushed him away because I didn't know him.He looked upset but he knew how I would react.

He told me that he was Chris and that he was my dad.  He also told me that his wife, who was my mom, was in the kitchen and her name was Sarah. He told me that she would be so happy to see me.  He led me into the kitchen and told Sarah that I was there. She turned around and smiled and she looked so happy, but I wasn't too happy to see them. She asked "Who is this and why is he here?" She seemed to sense that Jake was a werewolf.

I told her that this is my friend  Jake and that I brought him with me. She didn't look to happy to have a werewolf in her house, but I didn't care. I liked Jake being there. Then there was a loud knock at the door.  I answered the door and the two guys who had been following us, were at the door.  I yelled to Derek and told him it was them.  He came and told them to leave but they didn't.Then Sarah came and saw them and recognized them. She said that they were vampire hunters.

They came in and started shooting at Sarah and Chris.  They were using large guns with wooden bullets. They shot Sarah right in the heart and she blew up into little tiny pieces.  All that was left was Michael and they couldn't kill him as easily. He was much faster and kept disappearing and reappearing in different places in the mansion.  They just kept on shooting and shooting and finally they killed him. Michael also blew up into little tiny pieces.They must not have known that I was half-vampire, because they finally left.  I didn't care if Sarah and Chris were dead or not. I just put a blanket over them and took Jake and left.

Derek stayed behind because he liked the mansion. Jake and I took Derek's car and returned back to my house. This time we were not followed.I dropped Jake off at his house.  I then went to my house and waited for my brother to return from his friend's house.I then told him everything that had happened to me that day. He had known that I was adopted.But he was also surprised that my parents were vampires.He was glad that I had returned back home safely.

My days returned to normal and I was never bothered again by Derek. I never saw any vampires or vampire hunters ever again.I still remained best friends with Jake even though he was a werewolf.

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ItsSomeGuy420 Jun 13, 2012

Ever go suck a vampire penis you primitive vagina face.

ItsSomeGuy420 Jun 10, 2012

Terrible story you need to stop watching twilight and go get some writing skills.

Ever Jun 13, 2012

Nobody needed your opinion did they? You are extremely rude, nobody needs comments like this. They need constructive ones, something I'm sure your primeval mind won'tbe able to grasp. Get over yourself.

Velma golden Jun 9, 2012

good story, but it is a little on the kiddish side, do keep trying,some more practise, and you will be there

Lexi Jun 8, 2012

im adopted from russia! lol but i loved it! :D

T.M. Sanchez Jun 5, 2012

it was very nice but a little amaturish in writing style...... i don'tmean that to be bad, but just to help you grow as a writer. don'tmake so many little unneeded sentences.

Deangelo Jun 5, 2012

A nice story, but could get into detail. You used The words "told and said" A number of times which could have been Reworded to say Responded, replied, answered, but overall it was a good story.

Amit Jun 4, 2012

interesting story. i like it. :)

Pey Jun 4, 2012

one word. cute. c:

Kris223 Jun 2, 2012

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