A physco for a boyfriend

Others Stories | Jan 11, 2013 | 2 min read
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A physco for a boyfriend

I and my friends planned to go to a party in the following evening so i told my boyfriend to pick me up. When we arrived at the party i saw many of my friends there and my boyfriend took off. While enjoying my self i got tired and wanted to go home my boyfriend wasn't anywhere to be found so i decided to go home by myself. A week after my boyfriend started to behave strangely towards me and my friends he didn't want me to go out or hang out with my friends. I ignored his strange behavior and did whatever i wanted to. I and one of my friends Kerryann went to visit jannel when we arrived we rang the door bell but she didn't answer. When we went inside and went up to her room we saw her on the bed not moving when we looked she was dead so we called the police and they came and said that she was strangled. I was still in shock of her death until the funeral came and passed. Kerryann and i planned to study together so i went to her house when she opened her book a note fell out which says"jannels dead so you are next". together we both stared at the note in shock.Kerryann got so scared that she began to cry.After a week i havent seen kerryann anywhere and she wasnt answering her phone so i went to her home where i found her decomposing body in the bathroom when i called the police they told me that they where going to investigate.Later that night my boyfriend called me and told me that he had something to tell me.He told me that he killed kerryann and jannel because they where taking me away from him so i started to cry and hung up.The next day i was home and my boyfriend came to my house and came in my room with a knife and stabbed after me,i ran towards the door and came out of the room, he ran after me, stabbed me in the arm i managed to come out of the house and i found a shovel that when he ran towards me i knocked him out staring at his body i called the police they came and took him away a month later he was pleaded guilty in court and sentenced to 10 years in prison. for me however i was treated for the stab wound went back to school forget the whole incident that happened and tried to start things new with new friends an a new life.

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Diana Jan 14, 2013

You have a wonderful base for your story but, I think it could be improved with a bit more development of your storyline and your characters. You want your reader to be able to connect with the character you've given them. I think if you can do that, you

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